英语一的作文还是很靠日常积累的,依据潘赟老师的九宫格理论:
- 2——图画描述
- 5——意义论证
- 8——建议措施
这3个模块式最为核心也是最容易拉开分差的,对于时间有限的同志不建议忙下功夫浪费时间,而对于另外6个模块,还是有很多可以套用的模版句的,因此博主在这里整理如下~
目录
1——话题引起
3——图画总结
4——意义引出
6——意义总结(强调升华)
7——归纳评论/预测趋势
9——憧憬未来
(范例均来源于高分范文~)
1——话题引起
- it often hits the headlines of the newspaper that——这经常登上报纸的头条~
- has arouse a heated discussion among the public——在公众中引发了热烈讨论~
- As is vividly depicted in the eye-catching cartoon——正如这幅引人注目的漫画所生动描述的那样~
- It is an old cliche that I totally agree with——这是我完全认同的老生常谈~
- which is really common in daily life——在日常生活中十分常见~
3——图画总结
- Simple as the picture is,the meaning is as deep as the ocean——图片简单,但寓意如海洋深邃~
- The implication of the cartoon is not only informative,but instructive as well——漫画不仅寓意丰富,而且具有教育意义~
4——意义引出
- what lies in this picture ,or buried in the lady's word is clear——在这幅图画中,或者在女士的话语中埋藏着什么很清楚~
- why,you may soon wonder,does this phenomenon emerge——你可能会好奇为什么会出现这种现象?
- In this thought-provoking cartoon,what is buried in the conversation——在这幅发人深思的漫画中埋藏在对话中的~
- the painter strive to send out an implied message that ——画家努力发出一个隐含的信息~
- the author leads us to find the reasons why——作者引导我们找出……的原因
6——意义总结(强调升华)
- Were this situation to continue,we would pay a heavy price——如果持续下去,我们将付出惨痛的代价~
- This picture teaches us a wisdom ——这张图教了我们一个道理
7——归纳评论/预测趋势
- In general——总的来说
- To sum up——总的来说
- To conclude——总的来说
- It is hign time that we took effective and measure to ——是时候采取有效的措施~
- In my point of view——在我看来
9——憧憬未来
- only in this way can ——只有这样才能~
- With the joint efforts of the government,parents and children ——有了政府、家长和孩子的共同努力
- With comprehensive analysis after seeing,touching and experiencing every aspect,it is reasonable for us to expect the comprehensive development of the future career——在看到、接触到、体验到每一个方面后,综合分析,我们才有理由期待未来职业的全面发展~