英二主要是图表作文。一百五十词左右（18行左右，25min结束）

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  100单词左右（10行左右）
  15min

做题时间及其顺序

1. 写作40min
2. 作文90min
3. 新题型10min
4. 翻译20min
5. 完形20min
   

写作如何得满分？

85%的分数

• 单词语法正确、准确、多变
• 背单词
• 不能错，在此基础上准确

1. 三段论
2. 只要上下句之间有逻辑，就一定要用逻辑关系词
3. 多用代词代替已出现过的名词

内容一点都不重要，但不能跑题（切题）

语言的正式性和非正式性

1. 缩写词非正式
2. 泛指的不定代词you 在正式文体中要写成one
3. 正式文体的引导词that不能省略
4. 插入语使语言显得更正式

满分句型和单词替换

1.被动：

• 只要在作文中听到，我们、人们、大家、许多人、越来越多的人等，人或人称代词做主语的时候，都可以考虑写成被动

我们应该尊重长辈
Parents should be respects by us.

Parents: 父母长辈

1. Superiors
2. the elderly
3. senior citizens

Should：应该

1. ought to
2. be supposed to
3. be obliged to （强制性）

We us people:人们

1. human beings
2. private individuals
3. the folks 普通大众
4. youngsters and teenagers
5. youngsters on campus
6. undergraduates
7. juvenile
8. children offspring kids descendants
9. experts and professors
10. all children and adults
11. men and women in all works
12. customers

我们不应该盲目追星
Superstars ought not to be persued blindly by teenagers and youngsters.

Not 绝不

• Never
• By no means
• under no circumstances
• fail to

本句型推荐写在作文第一段的最后一句话，引出文章中心的时候使用，或者是第三段的第一句话，文章总结的时候使用。

污染很严重
Pollution is thought very serious by an increasing number of experts and professors.

think 认为

1. assert
2. presume
3. have been convinced that

very 非常

• outstandingly
• extraordinarily
• remarkably

serious 严重的

• grave
• severe
• fearflul
• fatal
• be if great severity

2.there be 句型：

• there remain… 有…

本句型推荐写在第二段第一句话，引出原因分析的时候使用。

有很多原因解释我的观点
there seem many reasons to explain my idea.

many 很多

1. a sea/ocean of
2. a host of
3. a multitude of
4. a train of
5. immense amounts of
6. innumerable

reasons 原因

• causes
• factors
• elements

explain 解释

• account for 解释…的原因
• contribute to 导致

idea 观点

• outlook
• perspective

例句：
There is strong evidence to show that…
There is a growing worldwide awareness around the world that…

3.比较结构

1.as…as…

Liu is as beautiful as a white lily, which manages to catch the eyes of a host of teenagers and youngster.

作文中只要出现形容词和副词的地方，都可以考虑写成 as…as…句型。

推荐写在第一段的最后一句话，引出文章中心的时候使用，或者是第三段的第一句话，文章总结的时候使用。

Be

现在进行时的be动词不能替换.
所有的感官动词都可以替代be动词(准确）.

• look smell taste feel sound
• seem appear prove
• become get
• keep remain

beautiful

• attractive
• graceful
• gorgeous

例句：（自信）很重要
(Confidence) keeps as important as a lighthouse, which plays a crucial role in our drawn-out and spectacular life.

污染很严重
(Pollution) is as serious as earthquakes, which (have threatened the health of helpless natives or even taken their lives away.)

2.the more… the more…

站得更高，望得更远。
The farther one climbs, the higher he will see.

the 加形容词比较级，后面还是形容词或副词加句子（主将从现）

大学生越保持努力，就会越幸运。
the harder youngsters on campus keep, the more fortunate they will became.

本句型推荐写在第二顿，分析原因的时候使用。
文化交流的越频繁，经济发展的越迅速。
The more frequently cultures are exchanged, the more rapidly Chinese economy will advance.

and

• equally
• simultaneously
• in the meanwhile

but

• on the contrary
• nevertheless

图表作文：一幅图两个主体，两个动作。

and but句型，推荐写在作文的第一段，描述一幅图两个主题，两个动作的时候使用，或者两幅图的时候使用。

描述图画的时候用现在进行时，给人感觉很生动。中间加个连词。

in the picture, the goalkeeper is imaging himself as small as ant. on the contrary, the soccer player is visualizing his rival outstandingly giant.
(可以加定语和状语)

温室里的花朵不能经历风雨。

picture

1. drawing
2. photograph

Not only… but also…

raising pets can reduce the loneliness of senior citizens.

为什么孝敬父母。
孝敬父母不但是中华传统美德，而且是
Respecting superiors not only keeps a Chinese conventional virtue, but also proves the responsibility of their offspring.

本句型推荐写在第二段，分析原因的时候用。

为什么不应该盲目追星？
Pursuing celebrities blindly not only exerts great influence on the study of teenagers and youngsters but also proves a waste of their tome and youth.

句型：it … that…
it proves common knowledge that
it proves self-evident that
it is universally acknowledged that

本句型可以写在作文中任何一句话的前面，用来拉长句子。但是推荐写在第一段第一句话的前面，用来描述图表.

更好的主语从句变体是：把it变成what，在that前面加is。

What seems beyond dispute is that…
写在大作文前面去。

a boy is writing the name of beckham on his face.

a boy, a crazy footfall fan, is writing the name, an important symbol of someone, of beckham, a worldwide famous star, on his face, some part of the body.
只要见到名词，原则上都可以加一个名词在它的后面加同位语。但最多加两个。

她长着一副大眼睛这个事实表明她是一个美女。
The evidence that
she wears a pair of big eyes manifests that she looks like a beauty.

很多女生都穿上了漂亮的花裙子这个事实表明夏天已经偷偷的来了。
The evidence that
a sea of girls have worn colorful skirts
manifests that
summer is around the corner secretly.

本句型推荐写在作文的第二段，分析原因的时候使用，它的模板是，the evidence that 原因的简单句+文章结论句。

污染
The evidence that
a heaven of bright stars and pure moonlights fail to be detected by urban kids
manifests that
pollution becomes increasingly fearful in our contemporary society.

城市化进程
The evidence that
rural migrant workers enable their children to enjoy better education there
manifests that more of them tend to swarm into cities and towns.

• 只要在作文中见到名词，都可以有意识的加一个定语成分，把句子拉长。

• 但是，在第一段描述图画的时候，只要见到名词，通常都要加定语，使图画的描述显得很生动。

a boy young as well as energetic is rushing to the destination which becomes a new start.

The eldest son looking rather cruel as well as ugly is kicking out his father who trembles on the ground like a fallen leaf in autumn.

描述图画的万能定语。

• as well as 连接两个形容词
• cute lovely little
• graceful elegant young
• passionate optimistic 积极乐观
• aggressive ambitious 有上进心的
• persistent 有毅力的

万能定语：
Who looks distinctly impressive to readers

• fat, cruel ugly uncourteous 粗鲁的
• Negative gloomy
• short-sighted double-faced
• contemptible 卑鄙的
• hot-tempered 脾气坏的
• terrible disgusting
• disgraceful 丢脸的

万能定语：
Who looks rather less impressive to readers.

which 引导的非限定定语从句可以修饰整句话，which就翻译成这。

他是一个色狼，这是显而易见的。
He looks like a lady-killer,
which has provoked the widespread concern among people.

which would give rise to dreadful consequences.

可以写在任何一句话的后面，对前面的内容进行补充说明，但是推荐写在作文的第二段某个比较短的原因的后面。

有十一个状语

1. 副词
2. 时间
3. 地点
4. 条件（if）
5. 原因
6. 让步(as through 虽然)
7. 方式（by）
8. 伴随 （with）
9. 目的
   10.结果
   11.如此以至于

在作文中任何一句话的旁边都可以加上状语成分，把句子拉长。但是在第一段描述图画或图标的时候，一定要加状语，使图表或图画描述显得完整。

描述图画的万能状语

• in the center of the vivid picture

分析原因的万能状语

• in light of the rapid advance of science and technology
• although many people fail to pay attention to the problem

Pay attention to

• pour attention into
• attach great emphasis on

problem

• phenomenon
• current situation

让步although引导的状语从句可用在任何句子旁边，对这句话的意思进行弱转折。但是推荐写在第二段分析原因的时候使用。

为什么网络不好？
影响了我们的学习和工作。
Suring on the internet exert great influence on the study and work of teenagers and youngsters
although it definitely makes our daily life more convenient,

为什么农民工涌入城市？
They, in big cities, not only find more job opportunities but also enable their offspring enjoy equal education like their peers in urban areas
although they might lead a tough life there.

所有都可写，但是推荐在第一段的最后一句话引出文章中心的时候写，或者是第三段的第一句话，文章总结的时候使用。

越准确越好

孝敬父母很重要
Supporting the elderly so crucial that time is supposed to be spared to accompany them.

万能句型：
sth proves so significant that
it should have been brought into the limelight under modern conditions.

3。分词作状语，放在句子的主谓之间，做插入语

作文中的使用：
描述美国小女孩
An American girl young as well as elegant, smiling sweetly on her face, is wearing Chinese costume which is popular in the southeast of china.

本句型推荐写在作文的第一段，描述一幅图一个主体两个动作的时候使用。
它的模板是：
sb.(定语)， doing sth1.（次要）+ 定/状, is doing sth2 (主要)+ 定或状。

The hot pot not only delicious but also healthy, smoking in the center of the vivid caricature, is filled with cultures from china and foreign nations.

或者 such as Kongfu， swan lake and bisheng.
专有名字首字母大写。

一下都是万能的插入语，可以插在任何一句话的主谓之间。

• 常见的副词及短语： obviously, frankly indeed
• 常见的形容词及短语：needless to say 不用说， most important of all
• in one’s judgment.
• exactly speaking honestly speaking
• to tell the truth , to be honest
• as we all know , on my opinion

无具体意思目标是强调，可以写在任何一个肯定句谓语前面

以上三个句型推荐写在第一段的最后一句话，第二段的第一句话，第三段的第一句话。

把一句话写成一般疑问句的形式，也就是说给一句话提一个助动词，或者是be动词放在句首。

not only does he looks poor

把so引导的句型放句首，用倒装。

如果你要远行，你就要关上所有窗户。
if you travel to the next resort, I will close all my windows.

只需要把已经写好的事态，写成过去式形式。

本句型推荐写在作文的第二段的最后一句话，分析原因的时候使用。或者是第三段的第一句话，文章总结的时候使用。

如果我们都不孝敬父母。。
If parent failed to be respected by their sons or daughters,
they would be despised by their own children in the near future.

如果每个大学生都沉溺于网络…
If every university student were indulged in surfing on the internet,
he would achieve nothing until to the end of their life.
they will be confronted with a dim and gloomy future.

2.It seems imperative/urgent that it seems urgent that Chinese citizens should
that 后面加should，不能省略。

本句型写在作文的第三段，具体措施的时候使用

措施1：他人

it seems crucial that
parents/teacher in primary schools or universities/communities
should educate/encourage
their kids/undergraduates/residents
不要出现政府。越准确得分越高

措施2：个人

cannot have failed to do
(we) cannot have failed to do

sth is as the foundation to high skyscrapers.
sth 很重要：
as sunshine in spring is to all creatures on the earth.

sth 很严重
as intensive pain is to the terminally ill patients.

写作连中文的都写不出来怎么办？？
比如第二段。

什么是追星？
pursuing stars is a popular trend among youngsters
which means that we buy their cds,
we take part in their concerts and we learn to sing their songs when we are still young.

总结：

sth1(文章中心词) is sth2 which means that 加三个主语一致的简单句，再加上when 引导的时间状语从句。

sth2:

• a severe global issue
• a chinese traditional virtue
• a social pervasive(普遍的) trend
• an active/negative mentality
• a hot social subject

什么是乐观

Optimism is a mentality which means that one fails to be afraid of frustrations,
one is brave to face any difficulties
and does anything he wants
even when he lives in the sewer pitifully(阴沟)

用在第一个原因分析的时候使用。

1可举小例子

I love reading masterpieces.
such as Gone with the wind, Pride …

作文中只要见到复数名词，都可以举小例子

For example, for instance

although multitudes of cases can support my simple view, the following one is most favorable.

举例模板：
I, the other day, had wrenched my ankle
during a basketball game yesterday.
Unfortunately, no families or roommate took care of me during the holiday.
At that moment, a dormitory assistant entered to give me some medicines.
Then, I fell better.
So the story vividly tells us a truth that()

举例需要注意的是：

• 一般使用一般过去式
• 一定要使用自己会的单词和语法
• 在单词语法正确的基础上，单词尽量准确。
• 注意逻辑关系词的正确使用。

在…国家，叫…

推荐句型

• the more… the more
• as… as…
• so… that…
• if
• 比喻

4.数据列举

In line with/in accordance with 根据
current 最近的
statistics 统计
by (the department of social science in Peking University)机构
an increasing number of 人
think that

如果能用中文想到原因分析，那么就用以下句型：

• the more the more
• not only but also
• 同位语从句
• 让步状语从句 although
• 如果 if

如果某个原因分析写出来比较短的话，就加定语或者状语把这句话拉长。
如果不会，就用which引导的为限制性定语或万能状语拉长。
如果用中文想不到原因分析，可以用一下方式：

• 定义与解释
• 举例
• 名人名言
• 数据列举

具体原因分析：
首先
First and foremost
the main element for the problem is that

其次：
besides
furthermore
最后：
last but not least;
as a consequence

第四句推荐句型：

• 被动
• as… as…
• so… that…
• 比喻

• there be +10句
• 
• 

先对着单词写单词替换，再用插入语，双重否定句，或者强调句型对他加工。

2、3、4句话：具体原因分析

总阶段，四句话。

总结句
总之+推荐句型

1. 被动
2. as as
3. so that
4. 比喻
5. if引导的虚拟语气
   再用插入语，双重否定或强调句型加工

写具体措施

推荐句型：

• 双重否定
• 虚拟语句

第四句

1. 喊标语
2. 建议法
3. 反问法
4. 引语法

四句话：

第一二句话：

一幅图两个主题两个动作，并且这两个主题是确定的：

• …的数量增加减少
• 百分比…做了什么事

第三句：

依然是引出文章中心的过渡语

第四句：

文章的中心句，需要自己写，再用双重否定，强调句型对他稍作加工。