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小作文
建议信
Dear friends,
I am pleased to be informed that you will pursue your further study in our university. I would like to extend our warmest welcome to you on behalf of the Students' Union
The following suggestions shall be of great reference to you prior to your coming here. First and fore-most, it is advisable for you to study Chinese as quickly as possible, which will be beneficial to your daily communication. Another advice we would like to propose is to have an in-depth understanding of the cultures of our two countries especially with regards to their differences
Hope the advice will be of some help to you. Look forward to your joining us!
Yours,
Li Ming
道歉信
Dear Mary,
How is everything going?
I am writing this letter to express my deep regret for being unable to celebrate your birthday with you next week. Yesterday, I was suddenly informed that there is going to be an academic conference in our school hall next week. My tutor asked me to fully prepare relevant presentation. Because I need to devote myself to completing it, I couldn’t steal time to enjoy myself at your birthday party. But, the birthday present I have prepared a month ago will be brought to you by Bob. Wish you a happy birthday in advance!
Once again, I am so sorry for this. Hope you accept my apology and write to me soon.
Yours sincerely, Li Ming
投诉信
Dear Sir or Madame,
As one of the regular customers of your online store, I am writing this letter to express my complaint against the flaws in your product—an electronic dictionary I bought in your shop the other day.
The dictionary is supposed to be a favorable tool for my study. Unfortunately, I found that there are several problems. To begin with, when I opened it, I detected that the appearance of it had been scratched. Secondly, I did not find the battery promised in the advertisement posted on the homepage of your shop, which makes me feel that you have not kept your promise. What is worse, some of the keys on the keyboard do not work.
I strongly request that a satisfactory explanation be given and effective measures should be taken to improve your service and the quality of your products. You can either send a new one to me or refund me my money in full.
I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Sincerely yours, Zhang Wei
大作文
社会现象类+个人品质类
机器人扶老人过马路
（社会热点类）
Vividly and graphically shown in the picture is an elder lady, holding a walking stick, and crossing the road slowly and stoopingly. Surprisingly, there is a robot holding her arm and supporting her to walk forward. Under the cartoon, there is a caption: “Technology has changed our life”.
Simple as it looks, the picture reveals a thought-provoking phenomenon that numbers of people are trying new smart products, such as robots, smart appliances, etc.. This is partly due to the fact that high-tech products could perfectly enhance our sense of happiness. If your appliance can be remotely controlled, you wouldn’t be bothered to do the trivial things after arriving home from work, for those things, such as cleaning the room, have been done before. However, their increasing popularity is detrimental to human being to some extent. If people become more and more dependent on technological products, a decrease in subjective initiative will follow.
To sum up, the development of science and technology has not only changed the living environment and lifestyle of human beings, but also greatly improved our living standards. However, it may also bring invisible harm to us, such as making people a slave to commodities, to which we should pay attention.
大作文思路总结：
第一段：
【第一句】描述图片画面
【第二句】引向本文主题
第二段：
【第三句】点明图片寓意
【第四句】列举名人/身边范例
【第五句】分析利弊，分析意义
第三段：
【第六句】个人疑惑
【第七句】图片启发，解答上句
范文举例：
第一段：
【S1】描述图片
Unfolded in the elaborately painted cartoon is an ironic scene: standing in front of a microphone and holding his script with a trembling hand, the aged professor is doing his utmost to deliver a speech, only to find all the students dozing off.
【S2】引向主题
By this metaphor, the cartoonist raises a question to all of us: how many students still bear in mind their mission.
第二段：
【S3】点明寓意（这幅图让人自然联想到当今的普遍现象。。。）
This picture is naturally associated with a wide-spreading phenomenon on contemporary campus – a striking fraction of youngsters, be they from prestigious universities or not, are squandering hours, days and even years of schooling time.
【S4】列举范例（越来越多的人。。其中一些人。。）
Not surprisingly, an emerging body of college men, keeping away from libraries or classrooms, are fascinated with online games all day long.
Equally unsurprisingly, some of them, although dragging their sleepy bodies into classrooms, leave their souls in the dormitory beds.
【S5】分析利弊
Indeed, it is reasonable for them to complain the heave burden and tiredness, but it is also fair to criticize their of negligence of their duty and their not living up to the expectation from society.
第三段：
【S6】个人疑惑
I used to ponder and wonder what my college life should look like, quick-paced or leisurable.
【S7】图片启发（这幅图提醒我。。。在此启发之下，我决定…。）
With the enlightenment obtained from the picture that “The movement of the Heaven is ever vigorous, so must a wise man strive along”, I am determined to set my college life as industrious mode – devoting every day, every hour and even every second to my major.
