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模板框架

1. As is vividly but subtly(symbolically) depicted in the cartoon/portrayal/photo that __.(描图 In contrast)Obviously, what the artist/picture tries to convey is well reflected/mirrored in the caption:().(What the caption/artist tries to convey is both instructive and informative.)
2. In fact, the metaphorical picture attempts to reveal that____(中心).When it comes to the significance of the phenomenon, I think it is necessary to discuss the matter further. (教育/精神品质/社会压力等).（经济发展/科技/举例等）. （最后有一两句结合材料）.
3. To sum up, _____(中心). The fundamental way in which the government (addresses the problem/promotes the phenomenon/popularize this spirit) is to raise the public awareness. The mass media should also take in the effort in educating the citizens. Only through concerted steps can our society have more peace and harmony.

可能用到的话

一、精神品质类

精神品质

1. People with the spirit of ___(optimism, persistence, diligence) can not only accumulate wealth, but also establish their career, fit into society, and even attain social status.
2. _____ can be regarded as a traditional Chinese virtue that has been handed down from generation to generation.

举例说明

1. For example, the Chinese academician YuanLongping, honored for his success in developing the first hybrid rice, is always remembered for his spirit of _______, which shines through every chapter of his life.
2. According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily/the Chinese academy of social sciences, the majority of respondents/(the CEO’s in large companies) all agree that/hold the same view that ______ (their success can be ascribed to the the spirit of … the environmental pollution is mainly caused by human’s behaviour)

二、社会热点类

科技好处

1. Technological innovvation really brings us much convenience, exerting a huge impact on our traditional cultures.
2. Invented less than a hundred years ago, computers are now used everywhere.

技术坏处

1. The youngsters are more likely to be overly dependent on technology, even getting addicted to it.

经济发展

1. The past several years have witnessed a burgeoning economy in China, and the living standard of our society has been substantially improved.

社会压力

1. With the quickening pace of urban life and even-increasing pressure, people in a growing numbers are suffering from either the physical or mental problems.
   拓展： 导致的结果
   As a result, they tend to become more selfish/self-centered.
   As a result, they tend to become more indifferent to the environment/the people around them.
   As a result, they need a role-model to firm up their confidence and guide their future life.
   As a result ,they tend to pay attention to short-term interests rather than long-standing goals.

教育坏处

1. It is our educational system that should be blamed.
   In current educational system, most students usually concentrate merely on their school performance but neglect the other important aspects in life, such as …

就业压力

1. With the unemployment rate running high in most big cities, job security is becoming less and less guaranteed

积极向上

1. There is an increasing upward mobility of the younger generation and dramatic changes in traditional concepts.

教育好处

1. Higher education plays a key role in aiding students’ growth and development, so that they can get the opportunity to increase their knowledge and learn to be independent.

三、其他背景句

第一段

描图思维

• 任务
• 动作
• 环境

描图类型

• 一个人
• 两个人（对话）
• 两图对比

第一句(粗描,不要写的太细致)

• It is vividly but symbolically depicted in the picture that
• It is subtly but symbolically shown in the cartoon that

1. As is vividly shown in the picture, an American girl is smiling brightly.
2. As is symbolically depicted in the picture, a hot pot is boiling with various of ingredients in it.
3. It is symbolically depicted in the picture that two men are walking quickly in the field.
4. It is symbolically depicted in the picture that a group of graduates are standing at a crossroad.

第二句(细描,展现水平,定档的关键句子)

• (主+谓+宾, doing)
• (主,which/who+谓+宾, 谓+宾)

1. The foreign girl looks especially beatiful and attractive, wearing a traditional Chinese hat,a beaded necklace and two long earrings.
2. These ingredients are consists of different kinds of elements,including Kongfu in Chinese civilization and Einstein(爱因斯坦) in western cultures.
3. the daughter, who has been a grown-up, is supporting her mother to help her walk steadily.
4. The students,who seem very confused, are facing four different choices: seeking for a job, taking the Graduate School Entrance Exam, studying abroad and initiating a company.

第三句
Obviously, what the picture tries to convey is well reflected in the caption: ____
Obviously, what the caption tries to convey is both informative and instructive.

• Obviously, the intention of the artist is well reflected in the subtitle: ____(描述标题)
• Obviously, the artist intends to draw our attention to the issue of ___(名词)

第一段举例

三句话定首段

a young boy is running fast past the finish line.
the boy does not stop his steps.
the boy continues to run.

As is vividly but symbolically depicted in the picture/drawing,photo, a young boy is running fast past the finish line. The boy who does not stop his steps continues to run in the playground. Obviously, what the picture tries to convey is well reflected/mirrored in the caption: the finish line is also a starting point(标题).

第二段

In fact, the metaphorical pictures attempt to reveal that_____ (表达中心)

中心的表达

1. ______ plays an essential/indispensable role in this era/in modern society/for the young generation.
2. ______ is of utmost importance…
3. ______ can exert/have a profound/marked/positive and negative influence/impact on our work and study/our lives/our society.
4. due attention should be paid/given to
5. one should lay emphasis on…

知道中心怎么写

• a loving heart can have a profound influence on our society
• culture communication tends to play an essential role in our modern society
• a living environment can exert a marked influence on one’s growth.

不知道中心怎么写

• it is important for sb to do sth. (it is important for Chinese culture to become increasingly international. )
• one should do sth(one should rationally follow their superstars)

过渡的套句
When it comes to the significance of the phenomenon,I feel it necessary to discuss the matter further.

• As regards the social implication of this phenomenon, my discussion is generally twofold.
• Two fundamental factors are involved in understanding this phenomenon.
• Considering the implication of this phenomenon/spirit, my discussion is generally twofold

伟人举例

• For example,___, honored for his success in ____,is always remembered for his spirit of ____, which shines through every page of his life.

• For example,Su Bingtian, honored for his success in 100-meter sprint, is always remembered for his spirit of optimism, which shines through every page of his life.
• For example,The Chinese academician Yuan Longping, honored for his success in developing the first hybrid rice, is always remembered for his spirit of optimism, which shines through every page of his life.
• For example,The Polish composer Chopin,honored for his success in classical music, is always remembered for his spirit of optimism, which shines through every page/chapter of his life.

万能背景句

经济类
The past few years have witnessed a burgeoning economy in China,and the living standard of our society has been substantially improved.

社会类
社会压力
With the quickening pace of urban life and even-increasing pressure, people in growing numbers are suffering from either the physical or mental problems.
As a result, they tend to become more self-centered/selfish
As a result, they tend to become more indifferent to the environment/the people around them.

技术类
技术普及
The Internet(/computer/mobile phones) has penetrated every aspect of dail life, greatly affecting our ways of communication.
技术好处
Technology innovation really brings us much convenience, exerting a huge impact on our traditional cultures.
技术坏处
The yougsters are more likely to be overly dependent on technology, even getting addicted to it.

教育类
One objective of education is to help students to develop new perspectives and to strive for achievable social and academic goals.
教育的一个目标是帮助学生开拓新的视角并为实现社会和学术目标而努力

重要背景句

精神类
精神品质与成功
People with the spirit of ___ can not only /seize plenty of opportunities/ accumulate wealth, but also establish their career. fit into society, and even attain social status.
精神品质与传统发展
(Optimism) can be regarded as a traditional Chinese virtue that has been handed down from generation to generation.
重要数字
According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily/the Chinese academy of social sciences, 70% of /the majority of the respondents/the CEOs in large companies all agree that ____.

结尾

To sum up, ______ (总结). The fundamental way in which the government (addressed the problems/ promotes the phenomenon/popularize this spirit) is to raise the public awareness. The mass media should also join in the efforts in educating the citizens. Only through concerted steps can our society have more peace and harmony.

精神品质类
勤奋
乐观
求知
坚持
独立
创新
团结
自信
自律
节约

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勤奋 diligence/ hard work
乐观 optimism
求知 seeking knowledge/pursuit of knowledge
坚持 persistence
独立 independence
创新 creativity/ innovation
团结 cooperation/ collaboration/ teamwork
自信 self-confidence
自律 self-discipline
节约 thrift

小作文

Dear _____(Sir or Madam)(Jack),
    I am _______(第一句).I am writing this letter for the purpose of _____(第二句).
     _______(核心内容).
    Thank you very much for your time and consideration.I apologize for any inconvenience caused. I am looking forward to your reply. I hope you can enjoy your work and life. Should you have any further questions, please let me know.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

第一句

• I am _____.(a student in local university)(公务)
• On behalf of …, I … (公务)
• How is everything going with you?(私人信)
• I hope this letter finds you well.(凑字数)

第二句

• I am writing this letter for the purpose of ______.
• It’s my great pleasure/honor to …
• I would be very pleased to …
• I am writing to take this opportunity to extend my heartfelf appreciation/welcome/congratulations to … for …

核心内容

万能建议: 写不出建议再用

1. 树立正确的价值观

it is suggested that you should set up a correct perspective/value about … in the first place.

2. 理论结合实践

In this regard, you could look for prior knowledge and experience.
In this regard, you could integrate knowledge into practice.

3. 具有行动力

a practical and reasonable schedule/plan should be made and conducted properly/strictly.

邀请信

The conference will start from a welcome speech by the president of our university at 9:00 a.m., which will be followed by the main event where ten world experts will deliver their talks. Finally, there is going to be a closing ceremony in the late afternoon.experts will deliver their talks. Finally, there is going to be a closing ceremony in the late afternoon