9分考官级雅思大作文范文之电脑技术的忧虑

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摘要：本文出自考官级作者之手，two part题型，讨论人类对电脑技术的过度依赖。对于这种级别的雅思写作范文，大家可以学习的地方很多，行文结构，观点句表达，用词，行文过渡方法。如何用尽量少的字数圆满地完成写作的各项指标。

本文为大家带来雅思写作范文，题目是We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer

technology. It is used in business, crime detection and even to fly planes. What

will it be used for in future? Is this dependence on technology a good thing or

should we be suspicious of its benefits?

我们愈来愈依赖电脑科技。未来它还将如何被运用?这种过度依赖是好是坏? 精研优秀范文而后反复练习反复修改是雅思写作 提升的不二之途。烤鸭加油。

范文

As we move into the twenty-first century, it is clear to see that we have

become more and more dependent on computers and information technology. This

technology now reaches into almost every area of our lives and it is easy to

predict that this phenomenon is only going to grow. My personal belief is that

this presents a variety of dangers.

It is highly likely that in the future there will be comparatively few

aspects of our lives that will not be influenced by computer technology. The

probability is that it will control more and more forms of communication,

transforming fields such as education and business when video-conferencing

platforms become more stable. It might even affect romance with more people

forming relationships online.

While there may be benefits to this technological revolution, there are also

a number of potential dangers. Perhaps the most serious of these would be that

if people rely on computers too much for communication, they could in fact begin

to communicate less well. For example, if every member of a family had their own

computer screen and smart phone, they might speak less and less often to one

another and simply look at a screen. This would be serious because our ability

to communicate is an essential part of our humanity.

My conclusion is that the growth of computer technology is inevitable, but

that this may not be entirely positive.